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指南者留學(xué) 馬凈
2024年07月26日
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<p>W同學(xué)所申請的項(xiàng)目主要分為三個(gè)方向:項(xiàng)目管理、計(jì)算機(jī)以及創(chuàng)業(yè)創(chuàng)新。</p>
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<p>這與其本科學(xué)習(xí)的聲學(xué)方向略有不同,屬于跨學(xué)科申請。因此,在撰寫文書時(shí),我們會(huì)先仔細(xì)查看W同學(xué)的項(xiàng)目經(jīng)歷和實(shí)習(xí)背景,將其按照與三個(gè)申請方向的相關(guān)度進(jìn)行分門別類的歸納梳理。只有對學(xué)生素材進(jìn)行合理分類,這樣才能最大程度的發(fā)揮其價(jià)值。當(dāng)然接下來,我們的文書解析也將從W同學(xué)分別申請的這三個(gè)方向進(jìn)行展開。</p>
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<h1><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong>項(xiàng)目管理方向</strong></span></h1>
<p><br />這個(gè)方向更側(cè)重的是W學(xué)生的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)能力以及團(tuán)隊(duì)合作能力,再者就是管理方面的知識(shí)。</p>
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<p>因此我們在撰寫這篇文書時(shí),以W同學(xué)擔(dān)任辯論社隊(duì)長的經(jīng)歷作為引子,凸顯出他對管理角色的理解;通過領(lǐng)導(dǎo)辯論社的例子來突出他協(xié)調(diào)團(tuán)隊(duì)活動(dòng),協(xié)作解決問題的能力,進(jìn)一步來強(qiáng)調(diào)他對管理的興趣所在。</p>
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<p>除此之外,為了加強(qiáng)自身管理方面的知識(shí),W同學(xué)參加了哈佛暑期項(xiàng)目,學(xué)習(xí)了管理相關(guān)的課程,這段經(jīng)歷也是我們這個(gè)方向的重點(diǎn)所在。因此我們會(huì)放大來寫這段經(jīng)歷,并且將W同學(xué)本科所學(xué)相關(guān)經(jīng)濟(jì)基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)也結(jié)合起來,突出他的管理學(xué)相關(guān)基礎(chǔ)。拋開理論知識(shí)而言,后面我們還進(jìn)一步闡述了W同學(xué)的數(shù)據(jù)分析技能以及在實(shí)習(xí)中團(tuán)隊(duì)合作的經(jīng)歷,他敏銳的數(shù)據(jù)分析能力不僅可以指導(dǎo)項(xiàng)目決策,在團(tuán)隊(duì)中也會(huì)與成員密切合作,尋求創(chuàng)新的解決方案,以提高工作效率,實(shí)現(xiàn)小組的共同目標(biāo)。</p>
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<h1><br /><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong>計(jì)算機(jī)方向</strong></span></h1>
<p><br />W同學(xué)第二個(gè)申請的方向是計(jì)算機(jī)方向。與項(xiàng)目管理方向相比,我們更加注重突顯W同學(xué)的計(jì)算機(jī)編程能力。</p>
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<p>拿NUS Master of Technology in Intelligent Systems 這個(gè)項(xiàng)目的文書來看,在這篇文書里,我們選擇了W同學(xué)三段可以體現(xiàn)其計(jì)算機(jī)能力的經(jīng)歷。</p>
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<p>開篇以W同學(xué)使用Python分析湖南省高考難度項(xiàng)目展開,整個(gè)過程涵蓋了他如何進(jìn)行數(shù)據(jù)爬取、分析,以及最終的數(shù)據(jù)呈現(xiàn)。</p>
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<p>緊接著,我們用W同學(xué)在某證券公司以及某咨詢公司的經(jīng)歷分別來體現(xiàn)學(xué)生想要在商業(yè)和技能領(lǐng)域深入研究技術(shù)領(lǐng)域的興趣,渴望進(jìn)一步擴(kuò)展自己的計(jì)算機(jī)知識(shí)。也正是由這一點(diǎn)過渡到擇校原因以及后面學(xué)生的職業(yè)規(guī)劃。而對于W同學(xué) HKU MSc(Eng) Innovative Design and Technology 這篇文書,我們則是從學(xué)生之前文書反饋里挖掘出聲景這一概念。</p>
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<p>W同學(xué)在本科階段所學(xué)的知識(shí)主要圍繞聲學(xué)展開,我們恰好從中發(fā)現(xiàn)了“聲景”這一契合點(diǎn),并將其進(jìn)一步拓展和深化,與所申請的創(chuàng)新設(shè)計(jì)項(xiàng)目緊密結(jié)合。通過將“聲景”概念巧妙融入文書,我們凸顯了學(xué)生申請?jiān)擁?xiàng)目的核心動(dòng)機(jī)。</p>
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<p>此外,我們將學(xué)生的專業(yè)背景知識(shí)與之對接,自然而然地強(qiáng)化了學(xué)生的申請意愿和學(xué)習(xí)動(dòng)力,使其動(dòng)機(jī)更顯專業(yè)和內(nèi)在。</p>
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<p>接著再佐以學(xué)生在實(shí)習(xí)中所積累的數(shù)據(jù)分析能力以及經(jīng)驗(yàn),我們強(qiáng)調(diào)學(xué)生與這個(gè)項(xiàng)目的適配度以及這個(gè)項(xiàng)目將如何幫助學(xué)生未來成為一名聲學(xué)顧問的職業(yè)規(guī)劃。</p>
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<p>總的而言,針對每個(gè)項(xiàng)目,我們會(huì)根據(jù)項(xiàng)目的側(cè)重點(diǎn)來選擇學(xué)生的經(jīng)歷與之進(jìn)行匹配,突出學(xué)生與之相關(guān)的能力,幫助學(xué)生成功收獲 dream offer。<br /><br /></p>
<h1><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong>創(chuàng)業(yè)創(chuàng)新方向</strong></span></h1>
<p><br />W同學(xué)最后申請的是創(chuàng)業(yè)創(chuàng)新這個(gè)方向,我們可以拿 NTU MSc Technopreneurship and Innovation 這個(gè)項(xiàng)目的文書具體來看。</p>
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<p>這個(gè)項(xiàng)目的文書要求需要學(xué)生提供一個(gè)具體的創(chuàng)業(yè)點(diǎn)子,涵蓋以下內(nèi)容 1. 關(guān)于這個(gè)點(diǎn)子,你打算解決什么問題?2. 點(diǎn)子背后的產(chǎn)品或服務(wù)是什么?3. 誰是你的客戶,為什么是他們?4. 您的點(diǎn)子涉及哪些創(chuàng)新?5. 您已經(jīng)做了些什么或者您將做些什么來使你的點(diǎn)子成真?</p>
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<p>在撰寫這篇文書時(shí),我們聚焦于W同學(xué)提出的創(chuàng)新創(chuàng)意理念 “聲控鎖”,并將它作為全篇的出發(fā)點(diǎn)和核心線索。此外,我們針對NTU的文書要求,相對應(yīng)對這個(gè)創(chuàng)意以及相關(guān)問題進(jìn)行了逐一回答。當(dāng)然,在文書中,我們也穿插了W同學(xué)的理論知識(shí)基礎(chǔ)和數(shù)據(jù)分析能力,以及NTU項(xiàng)目的相關(guān)知識(shí),以展示如何幫助學(xué)生實(shí)現(xiàn)這個(gè)創(chuàng)意。</p>
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