GPA近90的五院四系學(xué)霸雅思未達(dá)標(biāo),如何救回港大dream offer?
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指南者留學(xué) 陸倩倩(Seven)
2022年08月29日
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<p>又是一年入學(xué)季,看著22fall的學(xué)生陸續(xù)開始進(jìn)入研究生院校開啟人生新篇章,腦海里閃現(xiàn)出了一個個鮮活可愛的形象:為求學(xué)果斷放棄工作的工作黨,名校學(xué)霸們,勵志通過碩士學(xué)習(xí)扭轉(zhuǎn)本科劣勢的雙非學(xué)子們。</p>
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<p>在這些同學(xué)里面,22fall申請季最讓我印象深刻的非C同學(xué)莫屬。</p>
<p><br />C同學(xué)是來自五院四系的法學(xué)專業(yè)學(xué)生,GPA將近90,學(xué)霸稱謂當(dāng)之無愧。在21年3月中旬機(jī)緣巧合找到了我們,與指南者一起開啟逐夢之旅。</p>
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<h1><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong>一、選校及背景提升規(guī)劃</strong></span></h1>
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<p>C同學(xué)背景比較好,在地區(qū)及院校選擇方面,我們?nèi)轿徊季郑貐^(qū)選擇了香港、新加坡、英國,院校布局在港大、新國立、UCL、LSE、KCL、愛丁堡,專業(yè)集中在general法學(xué)、商法、知識產(chǎn)權(quán)法。</p>
<p><br />選校定好之后,還有半年左右的時間,如何高效利用時間綜合提升背景就成為了重中之重。</p>
<h2><br /><span style="color: #1890ff;"><strong>硬件條件</strong></span></h2>
<p><br />硬件方面,C同學(xué)的GPA是優(yōu)勢,申請需要遞交前三年的成績,我們讓C同學(xué)注意大三下學(xué)期的課程學(xué)習(xí)保持專業(yè)課高分。</p>
<p><br />語言方面,C同學(xué)最初語言未考,而法學(xué)專業(yè)的語言要求還是比較高的,像港大知識產(chǎn)權(quán)法需要總分7,小分6.5的語言要求。</p>
<p><br />為了更好幫助C同學(xué)備考以及在項(xiàng)目開放前考出要求成績,我們這邊贈送了雅思學(xué)習(xí)課程以及一些學(xué)習(xí)資料,并且規(guī)劃了雅思考試時間。</p>
<p><br />考慮到5月?lián)Q題庫,我們建議C同學(xué)4月下旬先考一次看下整體水平,如不理想,可以在6月進(jìn)行刷分,理想情況最晚8月底考出。幸運(yùn)的是,C同學(xué)第一次就考出了總分7的成績,為后面的刷分打下了良好的基礎(chǔ)。</p>
<h2><br /><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">軟件條件</span></strong></h2>
<p><br />在軟件背景方面,項(xiàng)目研究經(jīng)歷這塊C同學(xué)有學(xué)年論文經(jīng)歷,2段課程論文經(jīng)歷,都跟我們申請的法學(xué)方向匹配。我們建議關(guān)注大三下學(xué)期的課程,是否有機(jī)會產(chǎn)出相關(guān)主題的課程論文作為新的研究經(jīng)歷。</p>
<p><br />實(shí)習(xí)方面,雖有2段實(shí)習(xí),但每段都只有一個月,接觸的實(shí)質(zhì)性內(nèi)容不多。為了沖刺名校,在半年時間里面還是可以增加一段時長大于2個月的實(shí)習(xí),尤其是紅圈所,知名律所或外企法務(wù)部實(shí)習(xí)以此豐富背景,增強(qiáng)競爭力,C同學(xué)也認(rèn)可這個計劃。</p>
<p><br />因此,C同學(xué)利用我們的實(shí)習(xí)庫以及我們整理的實(shí)習(xí)信息進(jìn)行投遞,第二天就陸續(xù)收到了面試邀請,我們也提供了相應(yīng)的實(shí)習(xí)面經(jīng)資料,收獲了4家offer,并在4月開啟了實(shí)習(xí)。而這段實(shí)習(xí)后來也持續(xù)到了9月,成為了文書里面的重要素材。</p>
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<h1><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong>二、材料準(zhǔn)備與申請</strong></span></h1>
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<p>在材料準(zhǔn)備方面,C同學(xué)高度配合,按照我們的時間安排去準(zhǔn)備。雖然一開始對簡歷準(zhǔn)備稍微有點(diǎn)理解偏差,但經(jīng)過溝通過后就能補(bǔ)充上合適的素材。</p>
<h2><br /><span style="color: #1890ff;"><strong>利用專業(yè)興趣鋪墊文書,凸顯學(xué)術(shù)力</strong></span></h2>
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<p>在PS準(zhǔn)備這塊,可以看出C同學(xué)確實(shí)是個很有想法并且對法學(xué)充滿熱愛的學(xué)生。比如知識產(chǎn)權(quán)法的PS,我們用C同學(xué)對大疆創(chuàng)新運(yùn)用知識產(chǎn)權(quán)實(shí)現(xiàn)轉(zhuǎn)型升級引發(fā)她對知識產(chǎn)權(quán)的理解及深入探究的興趣,引出全篇。</p>
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<p>我們發(fā)現(xiàn)她的知識產(chǎn)權(quán)法專業(yè)背景、專利訴訟學(xué)術(shù)論文、律所知識產(chǎn)權(quán)實(shí)習(xí)內(nèi)容都體現(xiàn)了她在知識產(chǎn)權(quán)法方面的積累和她的法學(xué)思維及分析能力等,英文文書只經(jīng)過一次調(diào)整就定稿了。</p>
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<h2><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">語言未達(dá)標(biāo),堅持投遞后用love letter收到offer</span></strong></h2>
<p><br />港大的知識產(chǎn)權(quán)項(xiàng)目最早在9月中旬開放。考慮到雅思只有一項(xiàng)小分存在0.5的差距,并且之前這個專業(yè)也存在發(fā)conditional offer的情況,我們并沒有放棄這個專業(yè),而是決定先交申請,后面再刷雅思。因?yàn)閐ream school港大要到5月才出結(jié)果,等待的時間漫長而焦慮,在知道項(xiàng)目有開始營業(yè)而我們沒收到offer后,我們的心情無疑更加沮喪。但我們繼續(xù)給港大寫了love letter進(jìn)行最后的嘗試,最終順利收到了offer!C同學(xué)也終于可以在熱愛的法學(xué)領(lǐng)域繼續(xù)發(fā)光發(fā)熱了!</p>
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